Could someone who speaks English as their first language tell me please if this text need to be edited?
Hi friends,
I want to get the following text online on my website. Therefore, it must be polished not being weird for English speaking people.
I thank you for your time in advance,
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If you want to get a forum online at your own domain you will need a web host providing one of the forum softwares; Vbulletin, phpBB or SMF. Some of web hosts offer an installing service called "Fantastico". By using this service, you can create your forum without difficulty, even if you are not skilled in using any software.
To start your forum website:
Step 1: Register a domain name. A domain name is a name you want to call your website. For example, yahoo.com, articlesbase.com, threehosts.com or wikipedia.org.
Step 2: Buy a web hosting package providing phpBB, Vbulletin or SMFs to host your website online. A web hosting service provides you with online space and needed softwares. This enables you to get your forum online at your registered domain name. We recommend getting your domain and web hosting plan from the same company. This way, it is often possible to get your domain for free, due to some web hosting services offering a domain as a free gift today.
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If you want to "get" [create] a [online forum] at your own domain [address?] you will need a web host providing one of the forum softwares; Vbulletin, phpBB or SMF. Some of web hosts offer an installing service called "Fantastico". By using this service, you can create your forum without difficulty, even if you are not [familiar] with any of this software.
To start your forum website:
Step 1: Register a domain name. A domain name is a name you want to call your website. For example, [thisisadomainname.com or thenameyouwant.com] yahoo.com, articlesbase.com, threehosts.com or wikipedia.org.
Step 2: Buy a web hosting package [that provides] phpBB, Vbulletin or SMFs to host your website
online (online – is this word necessary?}. A web hosting service provides you with online space and needed softwares. This enables you to get your forum online at your registered domain name. We recommend getting your domain and web hosting plan from the same company. This way, it is often possible to get your domain for free, due to some web hosting services offering [the] domain [address] as a free gift today (you could also put?: [as an incentive to buy their package].
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I made a few corrections but I do not know if they were really necessary. All of your grammar is correct = D You write very well.
Sounds great!
Some of THE web hosts…It’s good.
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